Planning

Good research into similar texts. Some research into audience, but no analysis of findings. Graphs were needed. Some basic drafts.

14/20

Construction

Proficient use of software to construct pages. Good manipulation of images and text. The colour of font on the content page makes it difficult to see. More photos could have been included on the contents page.

52/60

Evaluation

Some very basic attempt to address the seven set questions. Minimal critical analysis. The use of bullet points is not acceptable here. Not enough detail or insight.

8/20

Overall

74/100 Grade B